Well, this week I got two out of three. My BYU Cougars got crushed by #1 USC. My Dallas Cowboys got an ugly win, but it was a win, over Cleveland. And my fantasy football team, the Klingon Warriors, held on to win over my cousin Scott's team, Automatic Win. The Klingon Warriors are currently #1 in the league, 2-0... read more »
This was a bit of a long chapter - just under 2500 words. And it's long in another way, too: it's the first chapter to detail events ocurring over a span of more than just a few days.
In case you're wondering what my novel is about, here's a summary of what I have done so far, in less than 500 words created automatically by Microsoft Word. (I have adjusted paragraphing and punctuation, but made no other changes to the auto-summarized text.) (more…)
Well, my brother Michael had a major problem suspending his disbelief for something that happened in chapter 27, and after discussing it with him, I decided he was right. Fortunately, I was able to come up with a satisfactory alternative, but I had to make some major revisions to chapters 27 and 28. There are several parts I've already written... read more »
I now have a copy of All the Rage This Year, containing my second published story. I can hardly wait to read the other stories in the anthology. The image of the cover is somewhat blurry, taken with my PDA's camera. I'll have to scan it once I get home. (UPDATE: new scanned version of the cover inserted.)
It's a relatively short chapter, just under 1300 words. But it got the necessary plot points out of the way, and I think it has a couple of good scenes, so it'll do.
I've decided chapter 26 makes a better ending for Part II of the novel, so Part II wasn't finished when I said it was. It's definitely over now, as is chapter 26.
...but one out of three is. And that's what my teams did this weekend. My college team, the BYU Cougars -- big ugly loss to the Stanford Cardinal. My pro team, the Dallas Cowboys -- big ugly loss to the Minnesota Vikings. My fantasy team, the Klingon Warriors (temporarily renamed the Alverian Dungbeetles in order to mock my dad's trash... read more »