Chapter 23 was a little awkward in its structure, with a skip of two days in the middle. And in looking at what was going to happen next, I decided I needed some more explanation.
Also, I have a specific pattern of points of view that I’ve been using, and so by splitting off the second half of 23 into chapter 25, and inserting an Allonna chapter as 24, I’ll have the proper point of view character for the events of chapter 26.
So the revised chapter 23 is now up for comments in the password-protected area.